So lets start with an up date, the character model.
to begin with i was kinda struggling with things as in relating what i was creating to the wire frame back plates we were given, i couldn't really get how other could get it all to match, you move one vertex in one view and its out of line in another. i ended up modeling flat, for example, i modeled the front half of the body and then the back. I'm now currently shaping it all together because i have two flat side at the moment that need joining. now having overcome i have to create the hands, like them and the head to the body then pose the character, simples?
Now back to some crazy vis nav stuff, after doing some of the tasks set by Jeremy, which at the time made no sense at all, i finally realise what he was getting at. the concept of creating new words for things and the idea of getting from wheel barrows to bungee jumping is basically a way of creating original idea's. as our time with Jeremy comes to a close i decided to do some more of this to create some story idea's to show and get feed back. A few emails and new stories later this is what I'm aiming for and I'm currently waiting for feedback on this too.. enjoy :)
DEA - DEJA VU
The story begins as a 1st person zombie video game, played by and office worker that gets interrupted by the thud of a large stack of files being dropped on his desk by his boss. stressed and tired Darren heads to the staff room for coffee. On route office is in panic, people rushing frantically around, due to Darren's tired state he doesn't take any notice of whats going on. now with a strong cup of coffee Darren sits back at his desk puts his feet up and slowly dozes off. waking several hours later he gets up to stretch noticing the office is empty, again heading to the staff room he sees on the TV there that there has been an extreme stress disorder outbreak driving people to excessive violence. the story goes on to include Darren being chased by his crazed boss. resembling the scenario in the video game, resulting in Darren pushing his boss out of the window and viewing the worlds end as buildings burn and sirens echo.
IDEA - DEJA VU (in shot detail)
- (POV SHOT) character running through city streets
- (CLOSE UP SHOT), showing sweating face, scars etc
- (MEDIUM SHOT) character running still, seems to be running from nothing,
The story begins as a 1st person zombie video game, played by and office worker that gets interrupted by the thud of a large stack of files being dropped on his desk by his boss. stressed and tired Darren heads to the staff room for coffee. On route office is in panic, people rushing frantically around, due to Darren's tired state he doesn't take any notice of whats going on. now with a strong cup of coffee Darren sits back at his desk puts his feet up and slowly dozes off. waking several hours later he gets up to stretch noticing the office is empty, again heading to the staff room he sees on the TV there that there has been an extreme stress disorder outbreak driving people to excessive violence. the story goes on to include Darren being chased by his crazed boss. resembling the scenario in the video game, resulting in Darren pushing his boss out of the window and viewing the worlds end as buildings burn and sirens echo.
IDEA - DEJA VU (in shot detail)
- (POV SHOT) character running through city streets
- (CLOSE UP SHOT), showing sweating face, scars etc
- (MEDIUM SHOT) character running still, seems to be running from nothing,
then a wave of zombies come running around a corner
- (CLOSE MEDIUM SHOT) boom, "DARREN!", (files dumped on office desk) i need these by tomorrow
- (CLOSE UP SHOT) of screen, GAME OVER in big flashing letters (showing that the character Darren has been playing computer games and has just been interrupted by his boss)
- (MEDIUM SHOT) Darren walks to coffee machine, there is absolute mayhem going on in the background, people rushing around frantically, Darren walking past oblivious
- (CLOSE MEDIUM SHOT) at the coffee machine, still not paying attention to whats going on around him and then retreats back to his office cubicle
- (BUST SHOT) Darren sits back at his desk, stretches and rests his hands behind his head, puts his feet up and falls asleep
- (CLOSE MEDIUM SHOT) Darren awakes hours later, gets up for a stretch to find that the office has been trashed and abandoned
- (POV SHOT) Darren looks left then right out of his cubicle and then heads to the staff room
- (CLOSE MEDIUM SHOT) arriving at the staff room that is also empty, the television is on, flickering from static to the news
- (CLOSE UP) reporters explain that there has been an extreme stress disorder outbreak driving people to excessive violence
- (MEDIUM SHOT) distressed Darren heads back into the office to grab his car keys, once there he hears a low mummer, a slightly snarling sound
- (CLOSE UP) turning to find his boss standing at the entrance of his cubicle
- (MEDIUM CLOSE SHOT) both staring at each other
- (EXTREME CLOSE UP SHOT) eyes twitching, his boss's with an angry twitch and Darren's with a worried look about them
- (BUST SHOT) Darren See's something flashing in the corner of his eye, he turns to See the zombie game and raises his eye brow
- (MEDIUM SHOT) Darren reaches for a compass and stabs it in his bosses neck
- (CLOSE UP SHOT) the boss pulls it out and growls
- (MEDIUM LONG SHOT) a chase begins round the office
- (MEDIUM CLOSE SHOT) Darren trips and a scramble on the office floor, resulting in Darren kicking his boss out of a window
- (BUST SHOT) Darren brushes himself down and looks up
- (CLOSE UP) a shocked expression
- (BUST SHOT)an over the shoulder view out the window at a burning city with sirens going on in the back ground
- (BUST SHOT) still over the shoulder view, Darren says, "deja vu?"
- (CUT TO BLACK) end
- (CLOSE MEDIUM SHOT) boom, "DARREN!", (files dumped on office desk) i need these by tomorrow
- (CLOSE UP SHOT) of screen, GAME OVER in big flashing letters (showing that the character Darren has been playing computer games and has just been interrupted by his boss)
- (MEDIUM SHOT) Darren walks to coffee machine, there is absolute mayhem going on in the background, people rushing around frantically, Darren walking past oblivious
- (CLOSE MEDIUM SHOT) at the coffee machine, still not paying attention to whats going on around him and then retreats back to his office cubicle
- (BUST SHOT) Darren sits back at his desk, stretches and rests his hands behind his head, puts his feet up and falls asleep
- (CLOSE MEDIUM SHOT) Darren awakes hours later, gets up for a stretch to find that the office has been trashed and abandoned
- (POV SHOT) Darren looks left then right out of his cubicle and then heads to the staff room
- (CLOSE MEDIUM SHOT) arriving at the staff room that is also empty, the television is on, flickering from static to the news
- (CLOSE UP) reporters explain that there has been an extreme stress disorder outbreak driving people to excessive violence
- (MEDIUM SHOT) distressed Darren heads back into the office to grab his car keys, once there he hears a low mummer, a slightly snarling sound
- (CLOSE UP) turning to find his boss standing at the entrance of his cubicle
- (MEDIUM CLOSE SHOT) both staring at each other
- (EXTREME CLOSE UP SHOT) eyes twitching, his boss's with an angry twitch and Darren's with a worried look about them
- (BUST SHOT) Darren See's something flashing in the corner of his eye, he turns to See the zombie game and raises his eye brow
- (MEDIUM SHOT) Darren reaches for a compass and stabs it in his bosses neck
- (CLOSE UP SHOT) the boss pulls it out and growls
- (MEDIUM LONG SHOT) a chase begins round the office
- (MEDIUM CLOSE SHOT) Darren trips and a scramble on the office floor, resulting in Darren kicking his boss out of a window
- (BUST SHOT) Darren brushes himself down and looks up
- (CLOSE UP) a shocked expression
- (BUST SHOT)an over the shoulder view out the window at a burning city with sirens going on in the back ground
- (BUST SHOT) still over the shoulder view, Darren says, "deja vu?"
- (CUT TO BLACK) end













